This is a writing challenge to all you grammarians. Apply all the nuances of the English language on the following and see if it has the same poetic sense. That will require not only a red pencil, editing, but reading and comprehension. I will add it to my book, also on my blog:
More Things I Write About Women
SCARY AND UNCANNY GIRL
She said she’s fast I said I’m slow
She not my lover, she said I’m only a friend
She’s really scary
I saw it in her eyes
I told her
We never talked about why she was scary
And we talked a lot
We don’t talk any more
But now she is scary
Because I am a Tom cat
She is a scaredy cat.
Are her two little kittens
The same way too?
Uncanny: She shows up to see me at the right time I can be seen. I say, “Now that’s uncanny and she smiles or not”
Lately she is being uncanny and a scaredy cat.
What’s up with that?
Is this how she treats a friend?
I’d rather be her lover again.
as the song says,
“You just keep me hanging on…”
I don’t know if she loves me
I don’t know if she needs me
she just keeps me hanging on.
Should I tell her to get out of my life?
I don’t know how.
Here kitty, kitty, kitty.
Maybe I am like catnip to her
Maybe because I am a Tom cat
That she is scarey.
I think because
She does not want to be my lover anymore
I don't want to be only a friend.
Why does she keep me hanging on?