Lately I have been reading a lot of Young Adult books and it seems like some of them add profanity just to create more of a "realistic" vibe of High School... but is it really necessary?

 

Am I just out of touch? What do you think...

 

Profanity- Necessary to develop a character in High School or a quick trick to bring your book down a level?

 

Kelli

http://www.ekfamilybooks.blogspot.com

 

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I have read many great books that I was hesitant to recommend to friends because of the language and/or sexual content in them. One book I read recently did not contain a single cuss word till almost half way through it. It almost seems like the author suddenly realized that he had forgotten to include any bad language.

 

I personally would like to see some type of warning label on a book saying that it contains vulgar language or sexual content. I don’t expect to see this happen in my lifetime.

 

I have set up a “wash rating” system on my book review blog (www.reallyrandomsite.com/thebookreview) that gives the potential reader advance warning of bad language or sexual content in a book.

Bothersome. Too many times I share a great story with my Mom and am embarrassed that I overlooked the limited vocabulary from the characters.

Great point... I have to shy away from sharing some books from my mom and friends because of the language. Sometimes its a bummer

 

KW

http://www.ekfamilybooks.blogspot.com

 

Allen, I know what you mean. I was reading an OK book and thought "Wow, no sex scenes" but the author made up  for it in the last two pages of the book. I thought it was porn and I gave the review a one star because the book was not bad. I e-mailed the author and she never replied. Most books give you an idea of what will happen.

I little is probably okay, like with bad guys or extreme anger, but some books have so much in it, it makes it difficult to read. I once read a GREAT book, it had 44 F bombs! So unnecessary, I couldn't recommend the book because of it. Too bad because it was sooo very funny! I recently wrote a book titled UNLOVABLE. It is a Teen YA romance.  There is no swearing and no sex,(it is not a "christian" book, I am a christian though). I have gotten good reviews, and I have sold 2500 copies in 3 months. Bill Cosby once said ANYONE can get a laugh with a dirty joke, it takes real talent to make and audience laugh without being dirty. When did it become a good thing to bring people down a level?? Shouldn't we try and uplift. This is just my opinion, of course. No offense meant to ANYONE! Thankfully we still live in a free country and we can read and speak any way we want!

Sherry, I just finished "A Most Unsuitabel Match" by  Stephanie Grace Whitson that had no sex, f words or a** words. It was a Christian novel, but not too Christian. You can see my review on my blog:mnleona.blogspot.com and go to the left side and click on the tille : "A Most Unsuitable Match". I will have to check on your books also.

Leona

Congrats on your book! I will certainly have to check it out! Its hard to find clean books that aren't over the top Christian Fiction

 

Kelli

Thanks! Hope you like it!
Great idea!!

First of all, it depends on your target audience. If you are marketing to children or YA, avoid profanity. 


If you're writing for grownups, avoid gratuitous profanity. That means don't use it if there's no reason to. The corollary of that rule is use it when it is necessary. If your character has just had his arm sliced off, it lacks verisimilitude for him to utter "Oh, gosh darn it!" Profanity can also add to characterization. The soldier under fire or the hardboiled detective may cuss, smoke, and drink to excess based on his environment and the life experiences that have shaped him, whereas the kindly old doctor or the school teacher would not. 


Also, the less profanity used within the story, the greater its impact will be when an expletive is uttered. That having been said, since I write for grownups, some of my work includes naughty words ;)  however, on my blog (www.KeithBDarrell.com) I use ratings labels to advise potential readers if a work contains "strong language".

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