Hello everyone! I’m looking for people who would be interested in reviewing a copy of my Young Adult Paranormal book, The Betrayal. It has been re-released and I’m interested in knowing what you all think about it. The book itself won’t be out for two to three more weeks but I have PDF’s I can send to anyone interested.

Zack and Matt McCannon have had a hard life. Their parents abandoned them when they were little; leaving Zack to care for his younger brother and to make sure he has everything he needs. This is not an easy task. Matt has powers and because of that, there is always something evil after him which keeps Zack on his toes to protect him.

In The Betrayal, Matt has a dream that leads the brothers to a cave where they look for a weapon they need to fight the supernatural. When they arrive at the cave, they find out the dream was a trap. A demon who has been after Matt since he was a baby, and who is outraged that Zack, a mere boy, has been the reason the demon could never get to Matt, is furious at being defied.  Now he has a plan. Get Matt to turn on his brother, kill him, and then kill himself.  If he can do that, Zack and Matt will be dead and Matt’s powers will transfer to the demon.

When the demon ask Zack a question, “How far will you go to save your brother?” Zack replies, “As far as I have to.” Now evil like no other is on a mission to destroy all the brothers hold dear and if the McCannon’s are not careful, they will not be able to escape!

The Betrayal is the story of family, love, honor and sacrifice and how one brother will do anything to save the other.

If you’re interested in reviewing it, please let me know. You can leave me a message here, or you can email me at sheilabes@aol.com. Thank you!

 

Sheila Hendrix

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Hi Sheila,

I am a writer of fantasy also and I would be happy to read your book. 

 

Nikki Broadwell

Hello Nikki! That will be great!. It's not actually published yet. I'm working on the formatting and stuff so it shouldn't be long but if you will give me your email address, I can send you an email that will have the manuscript attached, it that's okay?

 

I'd love to read yours to if you're looking for reviewers.

 

Sheila

Hi Sheila, That would be great--how do you want my comments? shall I send a word document?

 

 

Just realized you don't have my e-mail! It's nbroadwell@qwest.net--I may want you to review The Moonstone is you like adult fantasy...

A word document would be fine. Also if you would put your review on smashwords, that would be great. I'll send you the manuscript but if you'd rather get a smashwords copy let me know and I will give you a code to get a free ebook.

 

I do  book reviews and so I'd love to read your book. my email is sheilabes@aol.com.

 

Hello, I would like to review your book.

Great KW! Thanks. Where do you need me to send it? You want the manuscript or a free code for a smashwords ebook?

 

Sheila

the ebook would be great :) email it to me at alwaysabuttrfli(AT)hotmail(DOT)com thanks!

This book sounds like a lot of fun. Interested in doing a review at Mother/Gamer/Writer. s.diayll(at)gmail.com Thanks, Diayll

Hi Diayll! Thanks a lot! Do you want me to send you an email with the manuscript attached or would you prefer an ebook from smashwords? The written book isn't out yet.

 

Sheila

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