The Girl Who Sang - You Write On

[Stephen Skelton]

Help me win this book competition

Hi all, I am entered in 'You Write On', a British book competition and I would love some reviews of the opening chapter of "The Girl Who Sang"

Synopsis
In a future not far beyond our own, with Europe returned to the Dark Ages, the world is ruled by music. Maia Fielding, a seraph and songstress without peer, holds the secret to unlocking life or death through the ancient Angel Script

Here is the link
http://www.youwriteon.com/books/bookdetail.aspx?bookguid=dc8c6eec-a36b-4011-a282-bed8a3344ae2